My Life as a Piñata
Today is the day I get to the house
of the birthday boy. When I got to the house in a box they opened me as soon as
I hit the table. I am a batman piñata for an eight year old birthday party
tomorrow. They opened my back and out toys and candy in me. After they finished
they put me on the fridge and got ready for bed. Tomorrow is going to be a big
day for and I get to see everything when it is happening. It’s the morning time
and the party starts soon. I am watching everyone clean the house and set up
the decorations. I am the last decoration; they throw me over a tree branch so I
just hang on the tree. As people start to show up to the party I notice there
is a lot of little kids. I would have never though it would be this exciting to
be at a birthday party. It’s like I’m a kid like all the people, like I get to
see everyone running and playing. Finally, I get to be part of the party now. Everyone
gathers around me in a circle and I was just thinking to myself “why is
everyone looking at me now?” Then the birthday boy walking through everyone
until I can see him; he walks out with a big bat in his hand and he was dressed
like me in a bat man suit. I would have never thought it would end like this
but you never know what will happen so I just went with it. I had the obligation to get out of this
situation but I could not think of a way due to being hung on a tree by a string.
Not too long after the kind walked up to me I felt a bat hitting me repeatedly
in a whole but of different spots. I had dents all over my body with wholes and
candy falling out. It was the worst experience I have ever had in my life; I never
thought my life would be ending like this. That’s when I realize they stopped
hitting me and they took me off the tree. I’m so happy we are finished with
that torture I went through. Now I can be safe and sound in the house without
anyone bothering.
There are a few misspelled words here and there, but other than that, it is a very good job and a nice story line.
ReplyDeleteYou have a few misspelled words, a few missing words, and you didn't capitalize a Leg a words as well. Overall though, it was a good story and that I enjoyed reading.
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