Thursday, October 2, 2014

My Life as a Piñata

My Life as a Piñata


            Today is the day I get to the house of the birthday boy. When I got to the house in a box they opened me as soon as I hit the table. I am a batman piñata for an eight year old birthday party tomorrow. They opened my back and out toys and candy in me. After they finished they put me on the fridge and got ready for bed. Tomorrow is going to be a big day for and I get to see everything when it is happening. It’s the morning time and the party starts soon. I am watching everyone clean the house and set up the decorations. I am the last decoration; they throw me over a tree branch so I just hang on the tree. As people start to show up to the party I notice there is a lot of little kids. I would have never though it would be this exciting to be at a birthday party. It’s like I’m a kid like all the people, like I get to see everyone running and playing. Finally, I get to be part of the party now. Everyone gathers around me in a circle and I was just thinking to myself “why is everyone looking at me now?” Then the birthday boy walking through everyone until I can see him; he walks out with a big bat in his hand and he was dressed like me in a bat man suit. I would have never thought it would end like this but you never know what will happen so I just went with it. I had the obligation to get out of this situation but I could not think of a way due to being hung on a tree by a string. Not too long after the kind walked up to me I felt a bat hitting me repeatedly in a whole but of different spots. I had dents all over my body with wholes and candy falling out. It was the worst experience I have ever had in my life; I never thought my life would be ending like this. That’s when I realize they stopped hitting me and they took me off the tree. I’m so happy we are finished with that torture I went through. Now I can be safe and sound in the house without anyone bothering.

2 comments:

  1. There are a few misspelled words here and there, but other than that, it is a very good job and a nice story line.

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  2. You have a few misspelled words, a few missing words, and you didn't capitalize a Leg a words as well. Overall though, it was a good story and that I enjoyed reading.

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