Where people think saying something so mean to someone that it makes them take their own life.
I am from a time when no one can sleep with their doors unlocked because they have that fear of someone intruding.
I am from a time where instead of people being active that are as lazy as Garfield. They would rather be inside enjoying technology then go outside and play basketball.
I am from a time where people have bad attitudes in which they think it's going to get them someone and it's not.
I am from a time where people knock each other down instead of picking each other up. Instead of people saying "good job" or nice and positive things people say rude things like "shut up you're stupid."
I am from a time where people are just mean, bitter and have no filter in what they say or do.
I liked the very first stanza. I hate bullying also. It's wrong!
ReplyDeleteYour poem was deep and has meaning. Your poem was the truth. You spoke real stuff. Good job.
ReplyDeletePeople being lazy is 'MURICA nowadays. I liked your poem though.
ReplyDeleteI'm ready..... Depression. I wanna cry and I see myself in at least one line of this poem.
ReplyDeleteYou did a really god job explaining the time we all live in now. It was all very true! Great poem!
ReplyDeleteI like how you talked about the time in which you are living instead of yourself personally.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is so inspiring because you're right stuff like that happens all the time but I'm glad you're not like that you cool cat.
ReplyDeleteI like how relatable your poem is because all of what you said is actually how society today is.
ReplyDeleteI like how you pointed out the negative in the world( or where your from), I can tell you are a nice genuine person. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your poem and I really don't like bullying or rude things either.
ReplyDeleteI like how you talked about the time you live in instead of yourself personally. Good job
ReplyDeleteThis poem is eye opening of how cruel this world can be. Don't let the negativity define you. You be the person who stands out and breaks the chain. Awesome job!
ReplyDeleteYour poem was very accurate about today's society! It kind of scares me of how accurate your poem is!
ReplyDeleteAngel,
ReplyDeleteI like how open and reflective your poem is about your generation. I would like to challenge you to edit your poem and try to say what you wild do to make a difference.
I'm pretty lazy, and I like lasagna. I am not a cat though. That was super deep and pretty. Write more please. If you want.
ReplyDeleteAngel, I think your poem was really powerful and it made so much sense. I completely agree and I think this is what our entire generation is from.
ReplyDeleteIt was a very true poem about this generation and sucks to think about it but it's true
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