Thursday, September 18, 2014

Create a story

Once there was a girl that always hung out with her pet rabbit. They choose to go to the forest because the people in the city didn't like the rabbit. She was walking with the rabbit in her hands for about thirty minutes. Then she noticed a hole where the rabbit can hide. She was thinking she was in a quandary situation until she choose to keep him there. She left him there and went back to the city. She told them she killed the rabbit herself so they don't have to worry. She waited until it was dark and went back for the rabbit. She got there and didn't see the rabbit. She started to look everywhere in holes, in trees, in the tall grass, anywhere she can think of looking but didn't find him. She then started thinking to herself "she was sure this was where she left him."

2 comments:

  1. I was very into this story! I wanted to read more!

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  2. "She was think she was in a quandary situation until she choose to keep him there."
    Should read:
    She was thinking she was in a quandary until she choose to keep him there.

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